Red

Once upon a time there was a little boy who was abandoned at the age of 12. He was left all alone in the woods after a tragic accident,where he got separated from his parents. He searched and searched for them. After years of searching he had no hope left inside of him. Being in the woods all alone he trained himself how to fight. Before the accident his parents told him that there was a vicious wolf out there so be carefull.

He adapted to the lifestyle of the woods. He knew how to hunt, how to hide and how to survive from the dangerous animals in the woods. One day he found a letter in his pocket from the pants his mum  had packed him. The letter said , “Son if you are reading this you have survived. You are not alone in the woods  and you have a grandmother out there living in a small house.”

“What? How is that possible? Did my parents plan this?,” he thought feeling confused.

He rose up from the ground holding the letter to his chest having deep thoughts in his head, as a tear dropped down his face. He decided to look for this house.

As he was walking he suddenly heard the howl of a wolf. Taken by surprise he slipped down a ledge of a hill. He struggled to stop himself. He heard the wolf getting closer and closer. The wolf’s scream scared him, he looked backed then faced forward.... smack!.

He went straight into a tree. You could hear the crack as his body and the tree colliding. “Ahh,” he screamed as his  leg went first into the tree,snapping the bone then head on.He struggled to get up. The wolf was still howling, he was praying for his life. Wincing with pain, he pulled his leg up off the ground. Then grabbed a thick strong stick to keep his balance. Limping, he walked downhill to a flat path.

The wolf’s howling stopped. Red saw a house. He immediately walked down to the house as quietly and slowly as possible. He saw a figure and decided to call out.

“Grandma!!” he yelled at the top of his lungs. He walked through the entrance door turned right to see his a little old lady lying in bed.

He walked over to say hello.

“What a big nose you have gran”, he said noticing a big black hairy snout. With no reply he got suspicious.

In a flash the  wolf leapt out of the bed to attack Red. As Red was just about to get eaten his dad, huntsman came to the rescue and slayed the wolf.

“Where were you?

But then the dad told him in the middle of the pool of blood. That his mother had died. From this wolf years after we left you.

Oobleck

Yesterday we made oobleck with cornflour and water green food coloring. First we added half a cup of cornflour then half a cup of water. But we needed to add more cornflour in because it was too watery so we tipped in more cornflour then added food coloring.

The oobleck went hard but when you lifted it in your hand it would melt and fall off your hand. It would go all gooey and it stinked.  

No game two big loses.

The worst day of my life when I had no rugby game. Knowing I had a by, playing for marist the best team out here. All training's were cancelled yucky weather.  

The week after with no training's cause of the weather. We were destroyed out on the field two times in a row. We were slacking it on the field. We struggled with no training's and no game.

We lost but we will strike again with a nil win this Saturday we will be champs.

NARRATIVE STORY

The sound of people’s screams when the nuke hit. You could hear bones breaking people crying. As I was running to the bunker i saw a pool of blood around me and the burnt bodies that lied ahead. I made it with scars not scars on your body but on my head this scar will haunt me for the rest of my life.

With only darkness around you and fear all inside your body, the sound of water dropping from above. I heard people screaming for help but I was afraid to leave the safety of my bunker. I heard the screams of children and babies, I felt like a coward not to help.  

I could hear everything, explosion, buildings falling, and the walls around me shaking. I could not stand on my feet hearing the slaughter up above the ground. I heard voices I did not know what language they were speaking but then, I heard gun fires and screams.

I realised there was survivors above on the land. As I slowly opened the bunker doors I saw a figure, I realised he was holding a gun. I ran and ran for my life. I hid at the back of a crumbled building. I could see them through a hole in the walls of the broken building.

Full of fear and not knowing what to do, I paused for a moment then I turned to look through the hole if they were there. There was nothing, I turned back to a gun at my face. I pulled it forward to my head I heard a gun fire, I thought I had been shot and to my shock and relief I saw the light of a car. I opened my eyes to see my attacker on the ground. I saw a shadow of a person lowering his gun. He called me over and asked if I needed any help. Happiness filled up inside me, I knew i was saved. But still now those scars of fear still haunt my life.

 

TRIALS

Bill Mac trials for a rep team out here in east. I'm so excited for open trials. Today after school i'm gonna have to rush home mould my mouth guard.

Run back down to marist for the bill mac trials. There’s going to be heaps of people trying to be in this team just like me. If i make it in i’m gonna be so happy.

Bill mac is going to be hard to make it in but i’m gonna make it

Round one State of origin!!!!!

New South Wales victory. Sixteen to four the game was awesome. The defeat was shocking towards Queensland. New souths victory for round one was alright. But Queensland will get them back on round two, Jarryd Hayne's, try was pretty awesome.

But not such longer Michael Jennings's scored a epic try running, through Queensland’s defense. Scoring the second try. The New South Wales captain Paul Gallen had a fight with Nate Miles from Queensland.

Halftime Both teams ready, for another hiding. Queensland finally scored making the score fourteen to six. Queensland will win in round two. Billy slater will get some try’s and they’ll be awesome try’s.

New South Wales are not so good they just won one round. New South is going down next time Queensland see them. We will win this year making it a eight time winning streak. New South you're going down.

STATE OF ORIGIN!!!!!

STATE OF ORIGIN..........

Queensland supporter. Seven wins in a row undefeated Queensland are too good. New south wales are they gonna win no way they're not gonna win. The past is the past. Tonight's the NIGHT!!!!! Queensland are going to win first round.

Three rounds Queensland will win them all. I hope Queensland win the shield. We always have the same line up. We need a different line up. Queensland will waste New South Wales. I hope Queensland win. New South  Wales have a chance of winning with their AWESOME line up.

Tonight’s the night For STATE OF ORIGIN. Queensland vs New South Wales. New South Wales awesome line up. They might have a chance of winning. But they won't. We will win, QUEENSLAND SUPPORTER.